I will miss you so much, but can't express in words
I feel as helpless, as trapped bird.
The way you looked at me and long talks we had,
it's not you, but the distance, that is making me sad.
Someday you will come to know, I missed you every eve,
hug me for the last time, before you leave
I won't stop you, I won't make you cry,
But it's hard to believe, you won't be near by.
I wish to be with you soon come that day,
to see you, to hear the words what ever you say
Someday you will come to know, I waited every eve,
hug me for the last time, before you leave.
Standing by the window, I bid you good bye,
and controlled the tears, rolling from my eye.
You didn't read my eyes, you didn't feel my heart,
you won't feel the sadness, of us being apart.
Someday you will come to know I cried every eve,
hug me for the last time, before you leave.
You left the place, I burst into tears,
I might lose you to the distance, I always feared.
I love you so much, but never said a word,
and you didn't understand, the words unheard.
Someday you will come to know, I prayed every eve,
hug me for the last time, before you leave.
About Me
- Trioenix
- I'm not what you see. I'm not responsible for what you think of me. I'm an illusion- undiscovered. A puzzle unsolved. A mystery- unexplained. A dreamer, a story teller, a poet. Someone you've never met before. Someone you'll never meet again. You can never read my mind and cannot predict me either. I love to live in a disguise... and stay like a mystery. An aimless wanderer. Grown up at age but a child at heart. Part of the crowd, but I stand out. You may not like me, but you cannot hate me either.You may leave me, but you can never forget me. In one word as described by one of my best friends, I'm ENIGMATIC.
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hey dear,its an excellent work yaar..really,tears rolled dowm my eyes,,,beautiful poem!
A passionate resonance of heart !
One of the finest poems I have read over a couple of years !
Nothing is left more meaningfully than the legacy; and, it sets deep imprint therein !
Best wishes,
hello prajwala, your poem is indeed very beautiful. it speaks of passionate romance of the heart! it is just lovely, i can't tell you how i felt when i read it. please keep up the good work. i want to read all your work. am your fan.....
Nice poem.. The other posts are good too.
Note: burst into tears, not bursted :)
You have no idea how close this is to a recent experience for me. I loved the poem. Keep writing :)
One among very few poems that touched my heart. Similar to my personal experience. Its moving...
Good work! Keep it up!! ;)
Why you miss me it is not clear
You never valued me when I was near
I looked to you with proposing eyes
but all I got was long sighs
It's not me but the distance you blame
but Why I was always considered just a game
I dont miss you as you are in my heart
Even its broken you remain the vital part.
I can never hug u for the LAST TIME as even death also cannot set us apart
Oh beautiful heartbreaking feelings!
@ Partz
thanks
@Rashi
thanks! it was written with moist eyes to make others cry! I think I succeeded in my work!
@Saibal
thanks! I am honoured to read that it's one of the finest poem u read over a couple of years.
@ Anand
thanks a ton! looking forward to hear more comments (good or bad) from you.
@ Gucci
thanks!
thanks for correcting... correction made! :)
@ Geet
thanks! well I heard a few other people saying the same thing... I think we all are sailing in the same boat! :)
@ Hema
thanks! nice to learn that it touched your heart... so you are in the boat too! ;)
@ double
I think this is the first time you r posting a comment on my blog... and for the first time I'm getting a poetic reply for my piece of work... thanks :)
but yours portrays betrayal and mine helplessness!
yours blames the girl and mine the conditions!
we differ! :)
It is not really a poetic reply. I just copied and mended your rhythm [:)]. Anyway What I mean is a good piece of work.
heart breaking because of the conditions... actually, the guy and the girl of the poem didn't have a break up... just that the guy is leaving the place and now he'd b staying away! this is the reason why the girl is asking him to hug her for the last time!!!
thanks... :)
hi prajwala,
this one is really very nice.
I can't express my feelings in words after reading this poem
Wonderful writing, loved it!!!!!
i got senti by reading ur poem,so u can have an idea how much i liked it...i simply loved it... good job..
Nice. Although I thought it could have been a little more elaborate in terms of expression of feelings.
But overall it was nice
Cheers!
Hmm...nice.
sensitive and short.
thank you!
hey amazing
ur an auesum riter:)
sweet one buddy :)
A hug is a lot more than what its been thought as. I mean, its completely holding the person so near and never ever want to leave them,as u lock them with ur hands across.
So....
"Hug me for the last time before you leave"
is really an ironical sentence...which is a unique try ^ _ ^...hats off man... U have a great creativity.....
Good piece of work dear.....
"Just a hug on the pillow..to remember that u held me so close,
Just a touch of flower to remember our last touch....
Just a taste of dark chocolate to remember ur sweet kiss....
Just a breathe to remember ur presence inside me.... "
^ _ ^
Keep up the good work my friend....
Painful but not imposing - just the right note for me.
Thank you for this poem. A lot of people can relate to it. Well done!
Hi...This is Anshul frm Bhopal itself... I read ur poem 'Hug me 4 d last time'....U r good..2 good. The poem is absolutely God Levellled.. thr's no other word 4 dat... n it connects instantly.. Keep up d gud work..tc n gud luck :)
Hey Praj,
Good to visit your blog after long.
Archana, if you remember this(Soul's Scribes, there you got me:-))
Visit my blog sometime and keep those comments coming.
And do stay in touch:-)
lovely lines .. really touched my heart :)
@ Saurabh, MomentaryLapse
thanks
@ Sukhmani
thanks... yup got the idea
@Comfortably Numb
thanks
@ Mihir, Jade, Golden Vulture
thanks...
@Gaya3
thanku
@ Dame Folle
yup, many related so far and many more will relate in time to come :)
glad to know that u liked my effort
@ Anshul "AJ" Joshi
thanks... am glad to know that it connected u instantly :)
@Archi
nice to hear from u mate
@ Pia
thanks...
@ Pretty me
glad to know that, thanks
Lovely poem and lovely blog!!
tht was passionate
unfortunately,people who leave do so of their own choice, and more often that not they never return..the sooner u realise it the better for u..the world is a big place gal :)
Cheers
CRD
excellent work
@ The Lover
thanks :)
@ CRD
thanks... but that's not a break-up poem, it's the poem abt two friends who r parted by the distance!
@Sorcerer
thanks :)
very well written......
excellent indeed....
keep writing!!
wow amazingly well written... best wishes and keep writing :)
@ E!$|-|@L & Kunday
thanks :)
keep visiting for more
nice work prajwala
@ Vaibhav
thanks, keep visiting
@ Anon
okay, here is ur riddle
There was a man Watson who served for UK army in World War I and he died a natural death in year 1935, he had only 2 sons by name David and Edward, who were very young when he died. When his sons grow older in 1960 , one of the son (David)went to Court and gave a copy of Will that his deceased father had prepared, in which it was written ' I Major Watson who have served for UK army in World War I hereby give all my wealth and property to my son David' and it was signed by Mr Watson. Signature of Mr Watson matched with the actual signature of Mr Watson.
Still by just reading the Will, Court declared that the Will is fake and David have faked the will in order to get all the property (which was true).
How did Court knew that David was faking his father Will?